MaybeAndrew

Hey! back to review your chapter. Once again, it's a little rushed, and it really builds tension. But to specifics He’s being attacked, backed into a corner by 2 of ...

Hey! Andrew here with your review. Overall this is very well written, the characters are believable and it has a very classic magical fantasy feeling. I am excited to see ...

Okay, this is interesting, the power and cell outage is a quick and easy way to establish stakes, and make the story feel much smaller. The cell phone problem of ...

Hey, Andrew back again to a review of your chapter. After the prologue, this is an interesting change of pace, feels very eerie since we know how bad it can ...

Hey, I'm here to review your work. First, an interesting and creepy idea, and a mysterious start to a story. There are a couple things you could improve, but overall ...

Okay! I really liked that, it was very poetic, strong, and had a lot of good imagery and metaphors. The idea was strong and the turn in the middle on ...

This is interesting, I think I would always have liked to see young tom riddle, and this does a very good job at that. A couple points you could improve ...

Hey, Andrew reporting to review your piece. I don’t normally review poetry, but I felt like it today, but still, I’m no poetry expert, so take everything I say with ...

Hey, Andrew here reporting for duty to review your work. This was really well written, and I enjoyed the couples dynamic, definitely loving and realistic, but not to lovey Dovey ...

Hey! This sounds like an interesting start! There are defiantly some solid lines and ideas, such as "Her smooth and light voice shakes me from my prison, I turn and ...

This is excellent; the narrator of death is instantly likable. This story feels silly but still captures the fear and pain of an apocalypse. I am a little confused about ...

First off, very strong. I started reading this with a sweet smile and ended it with wet eyes. You make us feel the mother daughter dynamic early on, and the ...

I like it. The idea about doing one good things is strong, and the dialogue is believable. I only have one critique and it is as follows: Normally in a ...

It's a good start! There is a large vocabulary, the main character is interesting and I am curious about the world and the plot. There are a couple things that ...

It’s good, I like the way you really hammer home that it’s a ghost the entire story and we have to figure out she is in denial about her father. ...