MaybeAndrew

Oh my gosh, this is so meta and I love it. I don't know how you are going to write the entire story without having disturbing fourth wall breaks, but ...

Hey Harry! I like this chapter a lot, but most of the other reviewers have already said a ton, so this review might be a bit shorter. I'm really liking ...

Hey! Back again to review! I enjoyed this chapter a lot, felt very realistic. But once again, it feels more like I reading the meeting report than a novel. I ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your piece! Overall it's interesting, and the world seems well built, but I'm not entirely sure what's going on, and I have to agree with ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your chapter. This was a good advancement of the plot, though it felt a bit rushed. I like how we still don't know what's in ...

Hey! Andrew here for your review. I really liked this chapter, we really strengthened the friendship (/romantic relationship? The tag is romantic fantasy so I can't help but wonder XD) ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your chapter! This chapter really throws us straight into the action, and I'm excited to see where it goes, I hope we do get some ...

Hey, I'm here to review your prologue. I plan to review all the way up to the present chapters and then keep reviewing as they come out, if you think ...

Hey! Andrew here to review. This was interesting, I haven't read much fanfic and I haven't read much of anything in the 2nd person, kinda caught me off guard, but ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your piece. Overall it's an interesting start. I like the idea of starting what a romance(?), with a part in the future that is very ...

Hey! Andrew here with your review! This is interesting, quick, and felt kinda poetic in its rhythm. It was a little hard to gauge what was going on because of ...

This is definitely an interesting. The premise is intriguing and the writing is well done. I do agree with stormblessed that it is a bit expositiony, if you know what ...

This was interesting, a bit hard to follow, but I liked the format. The first time I read it I didn't even realize it wasn't a magic school, but maybe ...

This sure is interesting! The method of telling a story about a person from only what other people say too them is interesting! If this is the last piece of ...

Hey Harry! Andrew here for your review. I think this was a fun way to interact with the Harry Potter story. Sci-fi and time travel elements could really be interesting. ...