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yay! me likie! just watch your spelling. i noticed a few mistakes. all in all, i luv it. its a bit different. luv it! yay! :D

very good. love it, but i must ask... wat's it for?

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i personally liked it alot. it made me want to keep reading, and i like that about books (who doesn't?). Like Sam and ameliaoliver said, you do need to do ...

thanks all! i'll fix those problems as soon as possible. i'm grateful for the suggestions!

Thanks! i'll change those problems immediatly.

Thanks, Pyxis. I'll keep that in mind. The names i'm using right now probably are not going to be the ones i'm going to end up using, but i'll keep ...

I really liked it, Pyxis. I agree with Jennafina with what she said. Your story is very detailed and is definatly something i would want to read more of. Keep ...

The Bartimaues books were really good. I enjoyed them but thought they were boring at some points. All in all, they were awesome books, though.