Matthews

I love this!! It's absolutely fabulous. I didn't like the stanza about her looking at the phone, as it did not seem to fit with the previous lines, but I ...

It was the ocean It was the sea It was their god, Their hope, Their faith, For all to seek. None could share it, Only one could bear it. For ...

Head in hands, the razor nails dig into my sweltering brow, And the ravenous beast comes alive once again. I feel the urge to smash my surro u ndings into ...

K, I'll review as much as I can right now. Purple - comments Red - changes Italics - take out CHAPTER TWO It hadn’t always been like this. There was ...

This was awesome! :P I love it! The one thing I disliked was the "though" at the end...and if it needs to rhyme with "amigo" then maybe make it "a ...

It's cute, but rather unoriginal. Maybe ad of a few more interesting lines? There were quite a few exclamation marks in places that didn't really need them, and... ‘Cause you’re ...

Just a few suggestions: I call, I scream, I shout a name. But who can I trust, just who can I blame? Take out "just" My burden so heavy, my ...

I liked this, it wasn't boring to read, which I often find in this sort of poem. The repeats of "Don't you love?" got kinda tiring, to me, so you ...

Ooh I loved this just as much as the first chapter! It's getting deeper and more intense! You had a LOT of punctuation and capitalization missing. NOT cool. It would ...

Wow, this totally gripped me! I noticed some grammatical errors, but as previous reviewers pointed those out I won't take the time. I really really LOVE this! I love the ...

This was awesome! A simple idea no one would seem to think would make a good poem, but in reality it's really powerful and cool. Great job! Creative and original! ...

This was great! I absolutely LOVED your style of writing! You did everything beautifully, introducing everything wonderfully, not confusing, not a info dump. It's great! Def. PM me when the ...

I like this! Even though the repetition of "she is" was in almost every line, it didn't bother me or throw me off, as repetition like that usually does. I ...

I agree with the above two. The stanzas by themselves were really good, but together, they didn't really connect or have any theme. They all sounded like nice stanzas from ...

I really liked this! I thought it was well written and had a nice flow. It was very readable, and I wanted to finish reading it from the start, whereas ...