Matthews

Sydney She is a beautiful sunrise at the start of a great day, This beginning is rather cliche' and put me off the poem somewhat. It didn't bother me too ...

Hmm, interesting work. Rather bone-chilling, I must confess, so kudos on that! I like the narrator's tone and voice, and overall is, as I said, a thought-provoking piece. I cut ...

This was very emotional and thought-provoking. The really sad thing is, often times it's so true. I didn't notice any errors. I liked how even though this theme has been ...

Whoa, I love this!!! It's beautifully done, and I love the wording and imagery. GREAT job! It really drew me in, and I think it flowed well throughout. I just ...

This is really pretty and sweet. It was a nice length, flowed along, and had a beautiful story. I enjoyed reading it, and it kept my attention wonderfully. My only ...

Wow I love this. This is adorable, fun, and just a really overall enjoyable read! Great job!! The rhyme and rhythm is fantastic, and it flows along wonderfully. One TINY ...

The cool wind blows my hair in front of my eyes , but I pay no regard . W e had walked here multiple times ; Y our cheery eyes ...

This is amazing, the story is SO original and I love the idea. I used to have an imaginary friend myself. Homeschooled kids have friends FYI, so that sorta made ...

Well, this is a nice emotional piece, but it's not something most people are going to enjoy reading. (No, I'm not talking about the rhyming and structure.) As you said ...

A serious topic presented in a light-hearted way...well, you did a good job on it, but I still feel a bit depressed, since this is very true. I hear my ...

Aw, this is a beautiful narrative. Oh. On that topic, I think it'd go into Narrative Poetry, but it doesn't really matter. You say you wanted to write something 'not ...

I immediately clicked on this, being an avid pianist myself...anywho, it's very sweet and cute, but I think you could expand the idea. When I was young I used to ...

I love the vibrant words you used to really paint in my mind, but while I read this, I felt out of breath. There was no place to stop; to ...

Wow, nice job! You took a rather cliche topic and twisted it into something original and interesting. Good job on that! That distance they talked about, Who's the 'they'? Wouldn't ...

Hmm. I got that this was supposed to be sad, but really, I honestly didn't FEEL sad. Why? Lacking in emotion! Try to add some emotion, and a bit more ...