Master_Yoda

Hi Everyone, I just wanted to thank you all for your great reviews. Rosey, yours needs a longer response. Expect a comment on your wall sometime in the next couple ...

Freaking awesome! XD

Yo Hero! :) Here's my promised review of the revised piece. :arrow: Info-dump: So the first thing that I think when reading this piece is "Information Dump". You come in ...

I'm glad I could help. Actually, I dug this piece out of your portfolio when I noticed one of your reviews on another piece and went through your profile. I ...

Hey Everyone, Thanks so much for your reviews. :) Tayla -- I know I don't have a plot, but I find it tough to develop one with such a short ...

Firstly Fox, I want to apologize about the delay on this. I'd actually written a review completely, when my computer suddenly gave up the ghost, and I lost the whole ...

Hey There Worx I'm sorry about the delay, but I just finished my last exam so I'm finally available. I did not enjoy this chapter quite as much as I ...

Yes, Scribe, I understand exactly what you are trying to do, however as this is your intent, you do not need to generalize as you have done: Even among other ...

Hey Scribe, I know you don't usually like exposing your characters too fast, but I think that with regard to Vanaman you've slightly compromised your credibility. By credibility I don't ...

Scribe: It was, as is always the case, my pleasure to review your work. :) As far as the vampire issue goes, I would not disagree with C.S. Lewis's advice. ...

Hiya Rosey! :) I will try to do as good a job as I can with this piece. Let's see where it takes us. ^_^ The rock grated and screeched, ...

Everyone enjoys Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card. It's a great book, and it's critically acclaimed as well with both a Hugo and a Nebula to its name. :)

Try Tim Bowler's Bloodchild. It's marvelous. :)

Hey Stelagineva, As requested, here is your review. I stood on the balcony admiring the lovely colors of dawn. While this is not an outright boring first sentence, it is ...

Hi there Magnus, :) I'm sorry about the delay here. Unfortunately, my internet was quite uncooperative for several days. So, here I am reviewing your story a little belatedly. The ...