MaskedPoet

Hmm, as much as I want to reveiw this... This seems like one of thoes things that is personal and that it shouldn't be changed. So, is it written from ...

Hmm, might be a short novel.... due to the fact it'll be to long to be a short story.

Hmmm, Looking forward to seeing it.

Thanks again laura! Glad you enjoy my poetry.

It was wrote for my girlfriend, I wrote it for her well I say down in English... were I do most of my writing! =) I love her, any ways ...

The test i mean like a conspiracy story.

~Delete this post please~

Hmm, maybe perhaps one of there men get captured and the rest of there camp area got destroyed and all that's left is there squad and they got to go ...

Thanks Lily, :)

But, that's why there are editors.

Thanks, I edited it :) Yea, I'm bad at spelling and stuff... but I'm a good writer.

You're welcome, I'm new to the site so don't get when or were to see when something new is up! So if you'd like I got msn to contact me! ...

Before I post a reveiw, I'd like to ask... did he just get hit by a bus at the end? My brain is half asleep tongiht.

My poems in english tend to be cut short, by the whyspers of children, and the beauty of the snow outside the window.

Thanks, all the reveiws are helpful and I think I'm going to take in all of it. I'm going to add some of the stuff you guys said, but not ...