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Re: Broken glass.
I liked this poem, and the whole concept by far, there are a few things I would change if i were you thoe, could jsut be me cause I love ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: The Butterfly Effect
Hey, I've never reveiwed a script and this one I can't exactly reveiw due to the fact it feels almost... pointless? Why? Cause it was already succsful and you had ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Three Troops - Chapter 3: The Escape
What you said. :P I understand what you mean. This chapter was in a rush. I was bored and felt like putting some serious action into it! I am going ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Boxer
This was a good short read, it was heart warming that a beginner like the boxer got his first K.O. and his 6th win and on such a big guy ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: You Have Your God
This was a a great idea for a poem, and it is one that shows us how you're feeling and your thoughts on today’s thoughts on the thoughts of god, ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: First post, just expressing emotion, not very good :/
Hmm, this is the first poem I've seen with only one thing I'd like to point out, this poem was quite amazing and has shown me what you're feeling, and ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Five Lucky YWSers
Hello, I quite enjoyed these poems, and I'm sure those who you have written about will greatly love them as well. These five poems have some up and downs, a ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: The Hidden Treasure
Hello Lily! I enjoyed this read quite a bit, it was small but it was one that got to the point right away, like boom... bam... here it is, and ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Bus Stop
Alright, didn't want to post a review without completely getting it! ha, anyhow here is my review. I liked the concept of this poem, and the ending made me smile.. ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Three Troops - Chapter 1: Surprise!
Hello, I never start my reviews with anything negative so I wont, But this is one great story! I love to read story's about the war... Normally WWII tho, but ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Stolen
I don't know if I quite grasped the concept but to me I take this poem as the typical teenage relationships? I know it isn't but the way it starts ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: To Fall Beneath One's Shadow
Awe, I can't say anything about the structure or rhythm? haha, just kidding! Any how, the good thing about poetry is that one doesn't have to make sense, rhyme, or ...
Jan 7, 2011
