MarySue

" On one side of the table was a chair, delicately carved with ornate patterning and a soft red leather cushion on the seat. On the other side was the ...

Quite good, and just in time for the holidays as well! The only thing is, this feels more like just a summary of what he's done, perhaps you could put ...

Your descriptions quite good, however I feel like the reader doesn't get to listen in to what the protagonist is thinking often enough. It feels almost a bit mechanical. I ...

This was a really cute poem! I really liked it! You rhymed everything very well for the most part, the only thing I can think of that sounded only a ...

Though your sentence structure is good, and there aren't any grammatical or spelling errors, the sentences seem a wee bit choppy, so I'd recommend making a few longer ones. That's ...

This is gorgeously written. With no spelling or grammar errors (that I can notice), and vivid imagery that is appealing to the senses. The only thing I can find to ...