Mars

As Clo said, YAY! You posted some of your own work, and now I get to return the favor! *rolls up sleeves* Honestly, I really adored this. It was, for ...

Hey Serendipity! Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I'm here now, so let's go, yeah? This is a tiny thing but I don't think I ...

Hey Brooke, and welcome to YWS! Just so you know, we have a rule here that you should have at least 2 reviews for every piece you post. You have ...

Hi, MySunshine. I'm (finally) here as requested, and really sorry that it took so long! So, I must be honest - I really only have a couple of things to ...

Hey, Galerius. I'm really sorry it took this long, but I'm finally here as you requested. The first stanza, I think, is wonderful. It sets the tone for the poem, ...

Hey lilymoore! Here (finally) for the review (sorry about that)! So, I found little wrong with this piece. Yes, it was a little confusing, but I think it works to ...

That was about to change, I decided "They" not catching the narrator was about to change? That sounds awfully weird. I knew that my and the others attempts at Should ...

This is amazing. You are amazing. Brilliant. Lovely. Two lines that have too many syllables, though: through [s]such[/s] foul straits, through heartbreak's stain the silence [s]comes,[/s] wraps o'er m

Hello again! Nakayama-kun had tried to do this to me once. “What do you want, Jin?” m y father asked , as I was speechless. “Well?” “What do you think ...

Hey! This is great, but you're right, it does need some help punctuating. The first thing I'm going to do is give you two articles: one two and hopefully those ...

Hi! With the wave of your hand you say I think you should use a instead of the in this line - it's a tiny thing, but it does make ...

Hey again! I'll get right into this critique. So, I have a problem with your prologue. All it is is the narrator telling the story in a few words, in ...

Hey! This was...interesting! In a good way. Kind of creepy, kind of disturbing, but well-written. I do have a few suggestions. First of all, your description of Lexii is a ...

Hey Cassie! I quite like this - I'm just going to get right into it. I’m dancing over the others I must tread lightly and not disturb Their thoughts their ...

(As others have stated) I really like this. It takes skill to say so much in so little! Despite that, I wouldn't mind it being continued, since you obviously have ...