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Re: Listening
I get what you mean. Actually I agree with you. You're not just saying this to other poets, you're saying this to the world. Kinda like don't judge a book ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Misjudgment
If I had to use one word to describe this poem it would be WOW, just WOW. I can feel it, like I'm there with the person. A happiness stolen, ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Falling asleep
I get it, but I don't, if that makes any sense. The person is running away from something or someone. They know who or what it is judging by the ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Experiment 015
Not much to be said, or rather should I say so far almost everything is understandable. ALMOST being the key word. Why is 015 more horrified with her new name ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Smile
It's a really great poem,but are you referring to love or the innocence of childhood? It still makes sense if it's referring to love. However I see childhood innocence more ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: perspective
This was interesting. However, it doesn't seem like it should one single poem. Rather, like three seperate poems. Great imagery though. The last part seems so peaceful, like the perfect ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Happy vs Strong
Wow I wasn't expecting that. Though, concerning the mirror aspect of the poem, couldn't that also be seen as both people are one. I mean a mirror reflects things so ...
Jun 14, 2014
