Maricore

@Terry New chapter is up! C:

Oh alright! Thanks!

I'm sorry, I've been reading stories and plots for so long, its hard for me to get surprised anymore ^^' but I still liked it :) I would like to ...

Also you might want to add some appearance description for the main character next time :)

Thank you very much! No don't worry! I like honest reviews, they help me avoid mistakes. But sadly I don't know how to handle the commas and full stops and ...

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Well good luck dear :)

Hello! Thank you for the review very much! I've fixed the mistakes u pointed (man do I have a blind eye for grammar xD) Stay tuned for chapter 2! Again ...

Hello! I want to thank you deeply for your review, I corrected what you mentioned as much as I can. I would like to just point out few things, I ...