MargoSeuss

Thanks for your review. I'll have to give this another read over to correct the issues you mentioned. I wrote this ages ago so I haven't looked over it in ...

Phew. I was afraid this endeavor would have to be scrapped and made ankew. I swear, Terence runs rampid through my brain with his "For this story make me seem ...

It isn't absolutely mandatory that you read Biological Warfare or Deluded Love to understand this part. However, it is sort of a given that you read the first part of ...

Did you read the note at the beginning of this story? This is a three part story. Your missing information because you haven't read it. I said in the note ...

This three parter is written assuming that the reader has already read other stories in the series. The details about Jaune and Terence's characters are all present in prior 'episodes' ...

My good reader! Some of the questions you are asking would be answered if you had read the other stories in my series. In some of the other stories you ...

There is a good sense of mystery here. Where does Layla live? Where is Layla now? To whom is she retelling these events? The way this is written is almost ...

I have to admit, I am a little disatisfied with the way this sounds in the transition from stanza 3 to 4. I'm just not really sure what to do ...

Thank-you, Languid. The purpose of this poem is to demonstrate that somethings are just not meant to be. In this case, it was a relationship. Thank-you for your review.

Thanks, Traunt. Ususally my poems are humourous, and they ususally ryme. However, I wanted to try something different. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this. Thanks for your review. It means the ...

Thanks for your review. I appreciate your suggestion, but I'm actually quite happy with that line.

I'm thrilled you were intrigued. This two parter is part of my series called Undertakings of an Undertaker. These characters and this scene are present in all the stories. Interesting ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Stop by anytime you need a laugh!

Thanks so much! I'm glad you understood the humour behind my crepes and pizza line! That line was what inspired me to write the rest of it! I got the ...

I wasn't hungry. Crepes and pizza are the only thing that will fit under the door...they're flat. But I do love food.