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Re: fragile heart
Hello, xxgilespie1. This is Margo, here for a review. I like the meaning behind this story: see a person for who they are and not what they look like. You ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.1
Hello, Deanie. This is Margo here for a review. Finding a university to go to is definetly a chore! You've portrayed this struggle Tamara is going through quite well. When ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: A Lesson In Life From an A******
Hello, Aliyah. This is Margo, here for a review. You have portrayed two emotions very well with this poem. The first was a clear frustration and anger toward the subject ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: My Heart
Hello, Eferhilda. Margo here for a review. Your poem portrays emotional anguish, so deep, it physically hurts! While reading this, I felt the pain of the narrator. This means you ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Suppression Of Expression
Hi, Renard. This is Margo for a review. This poem is very powerful; very emotive. You have succeeded in making the reader ache for the narrator. This person is in ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Solitude
Hi, Cheetah. Margo here to comment. I was just par-oozing through you poetry and stumbled upon this piece, with which I totally commiserate. I'm a bit like this man in ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: I Want a Heart
Wow! This is Margo, here for a review. The concept of robot feeling emotion is classic. As a trekie, I can't help but think of Commander Data! He, too, was ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hello, Annaclare! This is Margo here for a review. I really liked the motivational quality of this poem. I could see someone reading this at some sort of seminar about ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Orin Nueron, An Introduction
Margo here for some reviewing! I loved the way Orin is described in this sketch. For the purpose of defining a character, you did a fine job. I got both ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: The Perfect Moment
You have adequetly portrayed a very serious and tender moment between brother and sister. You made the reader understand the nature of Kris and Kyle's relationship. They were very close ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Synesthesia
I have heard of this condition. I believe this works for taste as well. I heard that some people, upon hearing a certain word, can taste things. I wouldn't mind ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Words and Actions
*Margo enters stage* Margo: Uh, hello everyone...I, uh, have a review for Rascal. Wow, there are so many of you on this website! First of all, I would like to ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Summer Love
Summer lovin, having a blaaaaaaaast! Oh wait...*record cuts out* Heeeere's Margo for a review. You really portrayed a good picture of what these two look like together. An awkward, gullible ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Ivory Princes
Margo Seuss comin at you with a review. I like the way you related a psychiatric ward with a 'white castle.' The idea of living in an asylum suddenly sounds ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 6: The Sandwich
Haha! Perfect ending! This whole time I'm thinking Naomi and Carter are gonna get some action and then WHAM! Creepo mommy! I haven't read the other chapters of this story, ...
Jun 17, 2014
