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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: fragile heart

    Hello, xxgilespie1. This is Margo, here for a review. I like the meaning behind this story: see a person for who they are and not what they look like. You ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.1

    Hello, Deanie. This is Margo here for a review. Finding a university to go to is definetly a chore! You've portrayed this struggle Tamara is going through quite well. When ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Lesson In Life From an A******

    Hello, Aliyah. This is Margo, here for a review. You have portrayed two emotions very well with this poem. The first was a clear frustration and anger toward the subject ...

    Jun 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Heart

    Hello, Eferhilda. Margo here for a review. Your poem portrays emotional anguish, so deep, it physically hurts! While reading this, I felt the pain of the narrator. This means you ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Suppression Of Expression

    Hi, Renard. This is Margo for a review. This poem is very powerful; very emotive. You have succeeded in making the reader ache for the narrator. This person is in ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Solitude

    Hi, Cheetah. Margo here to comment. I was just par-oozing through you poetry and stumbled upon this piece, with which I totally commiserate. I'm a bit like this man in ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: I Want a Heart

    Wow! This is Margo, here for a review. The concept of robot feeling emotion is classic. As a trekie, I can't help but think of Commander Data! He, too, was ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 1

    Hello, Annaclare! This is Margo here for a review. I really liked the motivational quality of this poem. I could see someone reading this at some sort of seminar about ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Orin Nueron, An Introduction

    Margo here for some reviewing! I loved the way Orin is described in this sketch. For the purpose of defining a character, you did a fine job. I got both ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Moment

    You have adequetly portrayed a very serious and tender moment between brother and sister. You made the reader understand the nature of Kris and Kyle's relationship. They were very close ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Synesthesia

    I have heard of this condition. I believe this works for taste as well. I heard that some people, upon hearing a certain word, can taste things. I wouldn't mind ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Words and Actions

    *Margo enters stage* Margo: Uh, hello everyone...I, uh, have a review for Rascal. Wow, there are so many of you on this website! First of all, I would like to ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Summer Love

    Summer lovin, having a blaaaaaaaast! Oh wait...*record cuts out* Heeeere's Margo for a review. You really portrayed a good picture of what these two look like together. An awkward, gullible ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ivory Princes

    Margo Seuss comin at you with a review. I like the way you related a psychiatric ward with a 'white castle.' The idea of living in an asylum suddenly sounds ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 6: The Sandwich

    Haha! Perfect ending! This whole time I'm thinking Naomi and Carter are gonna get some action and then WHAM! Creepo mommy! I haven't read the other chapters of this story, ...

    Jun 17, 2014


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