Mangapirate

I cant fix the colors back to the way the were is being weird....sorry for future readers. I will promise to fix it with all my might....ish.

Wow...I loved this poem. It was awesome and beautiful.

Thank you very much. I changed it up a bit. You have helped me greatly.

This was a good poem. I actually tried to put this into a song form with my guitar and viola. It sounds good.

This poem was beautiful and saddening. I found this poem very detailed. I am glad I found it.

Thank you Warrior Princess. I really dont know why I capitalized the Crips and Clear....I just felt like it was a "capital' moment? :D

This is a cute poem. Made me say "aw". I liked it. Keep up the good work.

I liked this poem. It was very passionate and you used descriptive words nicely. Romantic and sad all at once.

ooo pretty colors(: haha. and i like the discriptions very niccce. i like it alott. and the title is what pulled me in. It is very unique Thank you so ...

Thank you guys. This has helped me some. I meant this to be Free style and not have an exact rhythm. I wrote this poem a long time ago. This ...