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Re: Deleted
I think they can bring them into their homes if they're in a really bad situtation. Whateve, maybe it's just not a good novel. :(
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: By Day's End.
Wow! Very nicely written. I'm eagar to find out why the mom bit the dad. I loved this, and am going to read more. Underline: Fragments Red: Corrections Blue: My ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Alice II
I didn't really understand the point of it. I'm pretty sure you realize this but, Love isn't a disease. Maybe it'd be more easy to follow if you made it ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Pianissimo: The Gentle Fall of Rain
So sad.... I don't understand why the mom left her there though.. If the dad was so abusive, why didn't her mom take her with her. She seemed to love ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Child in Chains
Very sad and decriptive but I didn't much understand a few things... for instance who was her keeper and exactly what was she..... Keep writing.
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Passing
I really didn't understand it mostly because it didn't describe much of what was going on.... I felt like I was floating by and not paying attention.... IDK. but good, ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: hey you! over there!
It sounds like it'd be a song. I like that you based it on a true story! Please re-read and spell check your work. I found many spelling erors.
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
Very good, hope to hear more like it!
Apr 10, 2011