Maki-Chan

Nicely written, I have been sucked into your story, so you will get more reviews from me ^_^ I saw no grammar, or spelling errors. Hopefully you will do more ...

Cool, this is somewhat strange and interesting. thats a question only god himself can answer me i can't comprehend whats really going on in life My favorite part! All you ...

YES! THis is exsactly how I feel about MATH! Its important but I HATE IT SO MUCH!!!!! >_< Nice word use, and comparing math to such things as a slow ...

Oh, I rather liked this. The word use was good, especially the ending. ^_^ and feel back down to the floor Its fell, now the gates of hell are opened ...

I loved this. It was so incredible cute. I loved the way the words seemed to flow perfectly together. You are really quite a great poet. I found no mistakes ...

Not bad, but it seems a little bit too univentfully. Maybe you can have more fun with words and spice up this chapter a little bit. I liked the way ...

Interesting I will read more, I want to find out somethings, hopefully in the next chapter. 1. who is Caolyn 2. why is she looking for a 'looking glass' 3. ...

First of all, I saw no mistakes of anykind. You always do a good job of your grammar. 2nd I thought this chapter was perfect. It was just the right ...

Well this drew me in. It was simple yet complex. It foreshadowed perfectly, and now I am interesting. I like the way you made it an old man reading a ...

From what I have been reading I could say that this could possible become a novel. Its really good. I really like your way of writing. I could really picture ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. I am Maki-chan and I will be doing your review. i have one word to say to you... AWSOME!!!!! This was a really great prologue. ...

I thought it was rather sweet, and so adorable. Myabe if you want you can lengthin this so that we can feel an emotional connection with the characters Gavin and ...

I liked this, and even though I pretty much suck at writting poetry!(WHY!!!!!!) I know a good poem from a horrible one. This one was a good poem. It flows ...

Hello ^_^ Alright Here is my review (in a very long time) I couldn't find any grammar, or spelling problems. The only thing I think you need to work on ...

not bad, not bad at all. You have a lot more talent at writing poetry than I do. I somehow end up making poems that don't flow well. Words that ...