Magenta

Great poem! I like the rhyming, which is not at all elementary-like. Great job and continue writing! Happy New Year!

Thanks for reviewing... I wasn't trying to be so direct but I see what you mean now. Thanks again and have a great New Year! -Magenta

Glad to help. Hope you have a great New Year!

Always glad to review! Happy Almost New Year!

Hope to have helped! Nice profile picture, by the way... :) - Magenta

Thank you for reviewing my piece! :)

Thanks for reviewing my poem. I'll consider another name for the poem... Any suggestions? Thanks again! :)

Thanks for reviewing this... I appreciate any help at all and if you look below, you can see that I tried to put them into stanzas but this wouldn't cooperate. ...

I tried to put the spaces in by doing what you said and it still wouldn't work... Thank though. :)

Thanks Cheetah! I'm glad you reviewed it because I was getting worried people didn't like it. It's good to get constructive criticism from other people so that you can improve ...

Thank you. Hope to review one of your works better next time... :)

I'm sorry that I didn't help you. I'll refrain from going off subject now on. I can't quite tell what your poem conveys because I wouldn't want to write something ...

I'm sorry that I didn't help you. I'll refrain from going off subject now on. I can't quite tell what your poem conveys because I wouldn't want to write something ...

I hope that I helped you out a bit. By the way, could you review my poem, Mirage, for me? No one has seen it except one person and they ...

Great! I am always ready to help, but it is really not my judgement that counts. Keep writing, though! ~ Magenta P.S. Do you mind looking at my poem, Mirage, ...