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Mageheart

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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Hundred Reasons

    You want to know who is an awesome writer? Look at the first word of this review! This story amazed me. It seemed at first like this story would be ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Question, An Answer

    I'm not a poem writer, so I can't really tell you what you need to revise structure-wise, but I can tell you that this poem is awesome! I really like ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Letter

    This is so good! Oh, I'm TheLearningWriter, by the way. This was a very interesting story. I can't help but wonder where you got your inspiration for it from. I ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: School Life -- Part One

    I really like this! You bring up a very important point. Most people, at least from my experience, bring up the side of the geeky protagonist. However, you don't just ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Other » Lyrical, Horror Re: Beginnings and Endings

    This is a beautiful horror song. Quite honestly, I'm not sure why I've been into the horror genre lately-Actually, it's because of FNAF. Anyhow, I really liked this song. It ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Young Guardians

    I really like this story! And I just had a "Ye Gods!" moment a second ago when I realized that you and the antagonist share the same name. That's pretty ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why must we fight?

    I'm not one for poetry-It usually confuses me-but I decided to check this out. I'm so glad that I did! It's such a good point. Not many people, at least ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Paintress

    .... Wow! This is so so so good! It's really well written and detailed. It's interesting how you made it historical. It really makes me wonder-Which is good for a ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Science, Satire Re: Breaking News: Super Hose “Extinguishes” Pesky Sun

    This is hilarious! Oh, forgot to introduce myself. I'm TheLearningWriter. Nice to meet you! This is like an essay-A total absurd one. I haven't ever read an essay like this ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Monologue of Destruction

    This is an amazing story. It's more than a simple listing of events-It's full of metaphors. When I started to read it I knew that it described me. It just ...

    Sep 7, 2015


In any free society, the conflict between social conformity and individual liberty is permanent, unresolvable, and necessary.
— Kathleen Norris