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Hey Alice! Mage here to do the promised review! She could feel four presences in the room. She couldn’t see them but she felt the doctor, the two nurses and… ...

Hey Alice! Mage here to do the promised review, albeit a short one! Let's get straight to it! Where’s Miss Claire? That's a very good question to ask. She is ...

Hi, Alice (I really hope you don't mind me calling you that.)! Mage here to do the promised review! So it appears Emmeline will finally get to leave her place ...

Hi, AliceAfternoon! Mage here to do the promised review! Also, quick question. Is it alright if I call you Alice? I'll head straight into the review. I still love this ...

Hi, Ellstar! Mage here to do the promised review! :D You had me hooked from the first sentence. I'm already in love with this universe and this story. I wasn't ...

Hi, AliceAfternoon! Mage here to do the promised review! :D Emmeline has already won me over, along with Miss Norah. I was wondering why two people like them would end ...

Hi, NoOneReallySpecial! Mage here to review your awesome short story! :D First off, welcome to Young Writers Society! If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask me. I'll ...

Hi Hattable! Mage here to do the promised review! First things first: I really loved reading this. I found it funny, and Douglas was very endearing to me for some ...

Aww! I love the ending, Eros! It's such a good way to tie up the story! :D Mage back again, ready to review this piece! I'll go through with all ...

Hi Eros! Mage here to review this awesome story! I was really surprised to find out this was a script, rather than a chapter of a novel. But your decision ...

Hi, NympheaLily! Magestorrow here (you can call me Mage :D) to give you a review! I hope it helps. First off, I love this story. Devan is an awesome protagonist. ...

Hi, BookWolf! First things first: I'm sorry for taking so long to do this. Second: I love the picture you began the chapter with. It's so beautiful. I tried to ...

Well, that was unexpected! I definitely didn't see the tornado coming, or Jay getting sucked into it! Oh, hi. It's Mage - the person who promised to write you a ...

You're very wise, Justateenager. :D Oh, I'm Magestorrow. You can call me Mage, and I'm here to review your work! Oh, and a belated welcome to Young Writers Society! :D ...

Hey Eros! It's Mage here, and I'm going to be the first of *hopefully* many to review this poem! :D I really love how you keep repeating the, "I don't ...