Maddy

Oh, it's satirical? That changes things- only a little. Whilst you might find it tedious, I (and hopefully many others) would appreciate it if you did label every piece of ...

Dammit, @Kirahh ! You bet me to first post. Not fair :P XD

Oh, I was supposed to post this in the lyrics section! Whoops. XD

@kakagirl, Thank you! I'm really happy that it created good imagery. I was aiming for that because, like you said, fantasy relies heavily on imagery to make them work. I'm ...

@awegs , @PinkShearwater and @Azila , Thank you all for your wonderful help! You've made me re-think, and I've elaborated on the parts that might have made you confused. :D

Wow. You guys are fantastic. You've given me in-depths reviews I could have only dreamed of receiving. I cannot thank you enough! I've taken all your advice in and switched ...

Thanks Moo, you've really pulled me up on stuff I hadn't noticed before. I definitely have a weak start and I really appreciate you pointing out my mistakes. :)

Thanks, Cannon! I totally agree with your comments, but unfortunately for me, the contest I'm entering this in has a word limit of 2000 and I'm pretty much on the ...

Haha georgie, this is my short story :D

Crazy, could you please tell me at what point exactly did it start to get boring?

Actually, I'll just attach it. It would be easier. Haha :)

Ellen, your poetry is so gorgeous! This has to be one of my favourites! :D

Thanks for all the reviews! They all mean the world to me. @Rosalie: There definitely is a reasoning behind these experiments. The reasoning can be sumed up in one word, ...

Oh, haha! I went through my review folders on MsWord and realised I nitpicked your prologue. It would be a waste not to post it, so I'm going to. :) ...

with excitement , waking up my wife, Dora. Isn’t that great?” I replied. “Of course it is , but that doesn’t mean you have to wake up the whole neighbourhood ...