Maddy

This is so quirky that I just had to write a review. Couple of things I noticed: Step four , and this is the worst. You will either live or ...

I find the calm, distasteful tone you are using too extreme. Abortion is a sensitive topic, something you should be aware of, knowing as much as you do on the ...

Hey, Masterheart, I'm Maddy, and I'll be your reviewer for today. Please, please, please make sure that before you submit any piece of work on YWS, that you proof-read it ...

I'll start off by saying this is very touching. It's a heavy subject, and I like your delivery. Yes, it's extremely similar to The Boy In The Striped Pajamas, but ...

Hey, Knightly! I'm Madz, and I'll be your reviewer for today. I’m sorry that I used you To break the impact of my fall. I fell into the chasm of ...

I'm in tears. Or maybe that's because I've been on this rollercoaster of emotions lately. Who knows? But that's beside the point. I absolutely loved this. It was adorable. I ...

Gracie, this is really quite nice. It's simple, the lines work well and it has a straightforward message that almost everyone can understand. The only thing I would recommend is ...

Hey, Lumi! :) I'm going to start by saying this was adorable. Truly. Azila and Persephoneia should be flattered. I did, however, find some (minor) errors: Gracie was a bit ...

Hey, Kima, here to review your piece. :) I'll start by saying I couldn't read this easily. Why? a) your timing and rhythm was completely off in some places which ...

Hey, Sophs! (Is it okay if I call you that?) :P I'm just going to come straight out of my (cardboard :P ) box and say I thoroughly enjoyed this ...

Hey, cat! It's Maddy here today, happy to review your piece. (Random, I know! That's the beauty of Review Day!) Before I start today, I will mention that I am ...

Hey, Gracie! It so happens to be a coincidence that I love to critque songs. I am a perfectionist when it comes to the feel and wording of a song, ...

Hey there, Dreamy! Since you are featured, and you are a fellow fan of VPM, I shall take my time to review this. I haven't found any nitpicks, but I'll ...

Hey there, I'm Maddy, and I'll be reviewing your piece today. :D Nitpicks: Standing in the center of the room, stood a man with a white beard and a purple ...

Hey, Ice! Just going to give you a quick review. :) Damn, this is so much better then my entry. I feel dishearted that I don't stand a chance against ...