MaddieNicolette

" Elsa didn't mind the cold though, she actually enjoyed it." you know the cold never bothered her anyway. "The little girl who once was broken and scared, was gone ...

" I had to best friends" Two best friends. " I defrosts you body" It defrosts your body. " When it comes out of hibernation, I defrosts you body; and ...

I would love to find out what this is all about. expesially the fact that you gave an intro, and the way you ended the story. loved the way you ...

"The hallway makes me feel sick. The walls are white, the floor is white, the ceiling is white. It’s too much white. Would it hurt these guys to add some ...

This really is great. i think this has a backround that neads light shed upon it. i would love to understand what the narrator is feeling. this also could be ...

It would be cool if you had a flashback to when they met with younger actors. maybe for the Nurse, you should make it a little more subtle... im not ...

HOLY COW. This is really well written and i personally love theater. I have one little note however. I had to keep checking the age of the kid you described ...

greenery struggling to survive gave off a sick yellow tinge. this i think should have a comma survive, gave. own blood as the dye. very cool and unique. And that’s ...