MadameLuxestrange

Hiya Wicked! Just Luxy here to take a look at your song. Really, I didn't find anything that stood out to me that I thought you should fix. The imagery ...

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'm going to review this for you. My system is red for grammar/spelling, purple for word choice, and blue is my commentary. As they say... good ...

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'll be reviewing this for you today. First off, I applaude you for picking this storyline. This particular topic is very personal to me as I ...

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'm going to review this for you. I want to start off by saying that this was excellent. It was very well written, your MC had ...

I must say, I've been following your work for sometime now, and this is the best I've read. I like how you acknowledge both sides of the story and how ...

Hiya kaka! Luxy here. This was really good. Your storytelling is great, as usual. The MC was very believable in the way of a girl who's dad is about to ...

Hiya Spork! Luxy here! I'm a complete schmuck when it comes to writing poetry, but I do love to read it. This is very much what I am thinking in ...

Hiya! This piece, as many others before me have said, was BRILLIANT. I don't know why but the whole part about the potato salad-making socialite made me twitch with laughter. ...

Hiya Fiction! Luxy here. This was great! I loved the plot, the characters, everything. There were only a couple of minor grammar mistakes that I saw, but again, very minor. ...

AAAAAHHHHH! I love this! I'm glad someone finally put my feelings into words. Since I've come to YWS, I've begun to loathe Facebook (I was kinda loathing it before anyway, ...

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'm gonna review this for you. I've got a system I use for this: red is grammar/spelling errors, purple is word choice, and blue is my ...

Hiya again! It's Luxy here, as promised. Red is grammar/spelling, purple is word choice, and blue is my commentary. Not after everything we'd shared. Chapt 2: Nobody said it was ...

Hiya Kaka! You asked for me to review, so here I am! My color system is red for grammar and spelling, purple for word choice, and blue for my commentary. ...

Hiya! When I saw your title the first thing that jumped to mind was the Evanescence song "Call Me When You're Sober". They're my favorite band so I had to ...

Hiya! Okay, I totally relate to this. You have no idea how much I relate to this. Seriously. Anyhoo, I would just work on spelling... that's probably the biggest error ...