Macyblak

It doesn't matter, I can't review either. Thank You for commenting!

Thank you! I agree with everything you've said!

Thank you. But, sorry to disappoint here, I have no story behind this. I was listening to Ed Sheeran and trying to feel emotions (I've been told I'm very shallow ...

I did do that. Do it all the time *corrects it*

I did do that. Do it all the time *corrects it*

Changed It.

Not Happy with the line "Before you blink". Need to change it but can't find my laptop and don't know how to edit through my iPod, so Just Ignore the ...

This was gorgeous. I just want to snuggle up to it and cry (even though i never cry). I'll just drink hot chocolate instead.

Beautiful. Literally heart-wrenching. A bit too emotional for me, but overall really well written.

DUDE. JUST. WOOOOOW. If this is shit, then what is mine? Awesome

*LEER* (Epic smirk of perverts all 'round the world) Thank You and LIKE IT

Um. The story is incomplete so i can't really completely Review it, but so far it shows promise keep it up.

Really well written, loved the fact that it rhymed and it had great flow. Keep writing!

I really appreciate you taking the time to review this, and while i do agree with you on most of your corrections, I'd like to point out the fact that ...

Thank you! Also a reply to what you said earlier about the format of the poem being more storylike than poetry. I base my poem writing style around Carol Ann ...