Macyblak

This story is really well written. Just a few grammatical mistakes here and there, but other than that, good job. The story's premise is very nice and it actually sent ...

This is breathtaking. But for all it's wondrousness, it needs a little tweaking. I'm not sure how I feel about the formatting. It's a little odd, to say the least. ...

I, to be honest, actually liked this poem. My only problem-It comes off as trying too hard to be what it certainly is not: A philosophical, dark, retrospective piece. I ...

This poem was very well written. I would point out the mistakes (cause there are some) but I don't know how to because I'm new to this. I hope someone ...

I liked the poem. Liked, but not loved, but only for a simple reason: The writing seems a bit forces and the poem a little convulated (I don't even know ...

Beautiful. I think you really captured what loneliness is, without making it overly dramatic, and i commend you for that. One problem, though; in the 1st paragraph, the last line ...