MRMarathon

I'd like to apologize for sounding like an attacker and thank suzanne for cutting the legs off my pedestal if it seemed like that. I'll still stand by my choice ...

who told you poetry was about grammar and punctuation? I've read a few poets who've been published who intentionally leave out punctuation and use even odd punctuation. Look at the ...

twistedly wicked. 8)

thanks snoik. idk if you read in the last paragraph but he's drinking 3 gallons of water a day by force since it doesn't taste too well. but idk if ...

I think this would be a great magazine piece. Did you send it yet? So what's this THEMA anyways?

somehow i think you were twistedly joking with this piece to see what kind of reaction you would get. but i liked it. i think it could be an amazing ...

that was stunning to my heart. i was wondering about that end. it seems like some kind of taboo is going on. but the girl, she's wicked which makes the ...

whoever says this isn't interesting ,ust be ridiculous or something. i thought it was very intriguing from the start and it enticed me the whole way through. a simple romantical ...

my answer to most or all of the questions is that this is purely exaggerated and more for entertainment value. my use of gentlemen is for irony and to make ...

the rhythm in my head makes it go swell. the vultures and tyrants represent evil in our society of men and vultures. the oppressors. the swarming.../vanishing is a method of ...

despite the critique on the line breaks i think it flowed beautifully otherwise. i think the thing you have right is the second stanze which i like.

very enticing, emotional and gripping. realistic. i like it. everyone else has covered what i would say so i thought i'd say the wonderful things.

that was like beautiful. i think this is perfect for the kind of audience it's for imaginative and fun. it's got a certain thrill to it also.

you have the best kind of silliness. i think it would be great for kids to read or something like that.

it's all abstract as i've said before. i'm more of an experimental poet. the woman in the poem is decribed as tanning for beauty from a tanning bed but the ...