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This made me go, "AHHHHHH, cute." I like it. All I can say is you use stones twice close together and stars twice, but the stars one I think is ...

I saw the blad I think you mean blade... The person I was fighting now, shoved my sword and you don't want a comma there...and that's all I see, but ...

Boys are such jerks in high school...and middle school...and most of elementry school when they push you down if they like you. I can only hope it gets better in ...

It rhymes! Again! How do you get it to do that? It's awesome. Now, I love it, though it depresses me just a bit, but that's life, I guess. Depressing ...

Hypnotizing. I'm ready to find out more. Of the two words, I'd choose undisturbed, but only because I know what it means. :) Okay, I just dictionary.comed it and it ...

Real quick, the only things I noticed were... rip you to shreds like a chid tearing up napkins I believe you meant child. And I think you could put a ...

Hey, Kwantacky! Wow, this makes total sense to me. And I'm sure it'll make more total sense when I read more. I like it, and it is very cool that ...

This was really good! It has a lot less spelling errors than most pieces I review, so thank you for that. So I only have a few things... cloud of ...

Darn. This always happened Should it be always happens? I don't know, technically, it could go both ways. nearly yelled irritated , after yelled miss Parker should be Miss Parker ...

LUUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVV it!!! (I meant to misspell that, please forgive my ungrammaticalness. And I just googled ungrammaticalness. Soooooooo not a real word.) And you're right, it rhymes! Awesome, mine ne

she’d gone to far mentioning the Mockingjay too Katniss had trod all over my stitched up heart all over again. maybe use something different than "all over" one of the ...

"She is too powerful too (to) exist in this world any longer." (H) is icy breath froze in the ornate mirror. A message appeared in the condensated water. "I am ...

But I have new, frightening, information I think you want to take the comma out after frightening. Would he really kick the door closed behind him when he's shooting people? ...

Oh my gosh, I've done that so many times. I'll start writing and it's like I go into a coma, and when I wake up, there's this really creepy poem ...

Hihi! Here's what I've got to make you become famous! my friends-my flock-my family I'm not sure that's the type of punctuation (is it a type of punctuation?) you want ...