Lyrienne

I enjoyed this, though your word choice slowed the pace a bit. Unfortunatly, you only posted one paragraph (for the reasons you mentioned below). I hope to see the rest ...

Yet again you manage to amaze me. You put in unexpected twists and turns that left me shocked. I didn't expect such a drastic change. You also throw in new ...

This was great. The story flowed and was interesting. The characters were believable and captivating. Your word choice was good too. You give us only a little information on what ...

So, after reading the Prologue and the first chapter, I have to say that this chapter has lived up to my expectations, meaning I wanted it to be unpredictable. If ...

I must say that I like this version much better. You answered a few of my questions and gave us more detail on her surroundings. You added a lovely scene ...

This was absolutely great. I enjoyed the prologue and I really enjoyed this. I didnt find a lot that bothered me, only that you used the wrong word a few ...

Okay, I like your writing style and word choice and the prologue itself is quite interesting. I did find a few things that I didnt like or would have done ...

This is a wonderful prologue. It entices the reader to go on to the first chapter. I think it will be fun to follow the story of the main character. ...

I admit i was glad to see that the second chapter came out. Just like the first, it was very enjoyable. We get to find out more about lute and ...

I thought this was very good. You introduce us to a newborn wolf and show us his first encounters. You also encourage us to continue reading to find out what ...

I must say, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. You had a good word choice and only a few errors. I found reading it was relaxing and easy. The story ...

This was truly good. The story started out slow, then picked up quickly. You introduced the antagonists and protagonist. You word choice was good. I do have a few things ...

The first thing i noticed when reading was that the story flowed. Your word choice was good and the only mistakes i could find were missing words here and there. ...