Lydia1995

Hello Anger! I am here as requested, sorry that this took a little while. Wow! This was really good, I can see that you thought out your characters a lot ...

Hello Hippie Vampire :D I really liked this haiku, just a couple of pointers to improve it. the goodness flow. Mmm. I think that you could have made that last ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I agree with Matt, you need to break these up so that they look like poems. You can have the line breaks in any place you ...

Hello Halycon! I really liked this poem there was some beautiful imagery in it. each diminutive speck My favorite part! It is beautiful imagery. I liked the formatting where you ...

Hello again Shubi. I have just reviewed your prologue and now I am here to review your first chapter. I liked this, the ideas you put forward in your prologue ...

Hello Shubi! I am here to review as requested. Well Done with this, it was a complex subject which you handled fairly well. I loved the first paragraph it had ...

Hello BenFranks, I'm here as requested. This prologue is amazing. Your description and word choice are really fabulous, they gave me a clear picture in my mind which is important ...

Hello BeKWithak! I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer for today. This was a nice beginning, with the whole transported back in time thing going on. Well Done. I ...

Hello again, Well Done! This is another great chapter, this is shaping up to be a really great story. Again just watch were you use your commas and periods, you ...

Hello WarioFart! Ok so I really liked this, you kept me gripped. You have corrected all of the mistakes except this one that I noticed: We can’t go know, since ...

Hello! Haha, Haiki! Were you by any chance involved with the discussion thread for the first event and the major war about what the plural of Haiku was? Anyway, well ...

Hello Kitty! Am I right in thinking that this was your Villanelle entry for the Olympics? I really like it, I like the storyline, it;s really powerful. As far as ...

Hello Dacoozed, I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer for today. I liked this poem, it was a good idea and it has great potential but it needs a ...

Aww Mr Knightley I feel your pain... I posted a terzanelle thinking that it was a variation of a villanelle when really it was just a different poem. I had ...

Hello Anuha! Welcome to YWS! Ok, I am going to review your poem, I will give my overall comments at the end, so first some little nit-picks. [quote]I hope I ...