Lycando

Thanks! I'll be posting new parts to this soon! :)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Well the man didn't know he would be shot, I did say that the people of the city thought the other side of the Border was just a wasteland, and ...

Tip one, space out the paragraphs, either from your word processor before you copy and paste it or space it out here itself. Second thing, the question marks, try to ...

For your information you have five other copies submitted. And also space out your paragraphs so its not nearly impossible to read. Thanks. :)

I think you need to correct the format here first.

Hm...was it me? I didn't actually delete it site crashed so some stuff was lost.

You posted it as a comment...huh...but it's fixed that way.

Where are you copying the text from? MS Word?

Holy crap, do split them into paragraphs first! It's a real turn off for reviewers! XD

ah ok I see now. And that's why elaboration is so important XD

Thanks for the review! :D

Thanks for the feedback! :)

Thanks for the feedback! :)

Ah...interesting. So it's a wrong person then? o.o