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Re: Journey To Nevercross Chapter 05
Hey there! I think I get the feeling Neon's journey is about to begin! It's this part of the story where the plot thickens and the true villain comes into ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: Notes Between Pages Part 1
Hey there! First off this review will be pretty short, simply because I really enjoyed reading this. The only nitpick I can really spot. “Kennedy, I know that you’re already ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
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Vanakkam! Are you an Indian, because your name seems that way? If not then my apologies! :) I like this story very much. It has it's own kind of magic ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: The Diamond Fist (2)
Hey there Blues! Alright so I find this story to be building up in it's excitement. Note that I didn't read the first chapter but still from the recap I ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: James Volt, Final Revision.
Hey there! Alright so this story didn't really get me excited. Think about it, for half the story you seem to be going on and on about James and his ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: The Rholtaii Heritage - Chapter 8
Hey there! I missed out quite a few chapters of this, so there's bound to be some things I don't understand. But since I've a little understanding so far, I'll ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Vienna -Chapter 1-
Hey there! First off I think this would be better of as a prologue than the first chapter. Reason being it's pretty short and it's just a single scene. It's ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Chairman's Award
Hey there! Alright this is my first time judging an essay so bear with me if I seem repetitive or inconsistent in this. From a person who really has no ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: VV Ch. 4
Hey there! Normally, I wouldn't read such a long chapter like this, but I do have a soft spot for science fiction stories, especially those involving futuristic settings and technology. ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 3: Merciless.
Hey there! So I read through this story, and one huge thing I have to say. The paragraphs are WAY TOO LONG. Normally I wouldn't include any caps in my ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: "Home" Part 1
Hey there! Alright, this was a fairly long chapter for my tastes, I prefer reading and reviewing shorter chapters but I stuck to this for as long as possible. First ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Chelsea
Hey there! I liked this story quite a bit! It was a short one though, and I didn't really get the emotions I was looking for. I understand you wanted ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Blood and Alcopops - Prologue
Hey there! I really find this story to be interesting. It captivates the reader from the start, since it already plunges into some sort of conflict at the beginning. The ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Gateway to the Supernatural
Hey there! I really liked the first paragraph. It clearly describes the drug and introduces it to the reader. For a science fiction story, this is somehow important because many ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: VV Ch. 3
Hey there! I really like where this is going! It's getting more and more interesting each chapter! I like that you introduce the nostalgic moment in the story. It's a ...
Jan 12, 2013
