LunaBuna43

I'm reading the book right now...It's really good so far. I like it ALOT more than the movie. The movie was a little...meh? The beginning of the movie was a ...

I like this! It's very short and cool! 8) Like you're jealou of a girl that the guy you like likes right? That might have been a little confusing! But, ...

I like this TN! Punctuation may be good! 8) I was just looking through all your works and wanted to read this...anyway other than puntuation it was really good! Just ...

I agree with God. It does remind me of Treasure Island . The pirate talk is a little over-used in a few place. All in all it was really good! ...

Haha! That's awesome! I slipped off my chair! :lol: Anyway, good job! :thud: ~Lulu

ooh! TN I love this! Great job! Maybe it was because so many people in her family died because of alchohal. It's supposed to be alcohol :D That's all I ...

Has anyone heard about Rachelle Lefevre as Victoria? I've been hearing it alot recently and I just can't tell if it's true or not? I mean Rachelle Lefevre would be ...

Emma felt a hand on her shoulder and looked up to find Emma's wide eyes staring down at her. I think you mean, Penelope felt a hand on her shoulder ...

I liked it. Very interesting. Only part I didn't understand was this; the can of worms were spilled all over her pleated red dress. It doesn't fit well in this ...

!!!HI PAUL!!! Space out the dialouge pwease and you do use said and asked alot Either Mrs.Spencer or I help you out more at school!! Sorry if I's strict...just doin ...

Wow! This is great! For some reason I almost cried at the end... :cry: I agree with MV. It happened to quickly. Other than that it's really good. Have Fun ...

I'll put the thing that need to be fixed in bold. Okay. I like the first paragraph. The second paragraph was good also, only one, small mistake. You forgot a ...

*Steals Jasper, Seth, and Quil plushies and snuggles them!!* Oh my gosh!! I just finished this series!! I can't wait for the 4th book and the movie to come out!! ...