LucidNightmare

Thank you!

That's a good suggestion about adding more emotion lines! I will definitely try to do that next time. But... for this poem, the MC is not feeling very many emotions. ...

Actually, this is a suicide letter. In the description I mentioned that the MC's birthday is tomorrow, but that's not why they're excited. Sooo... yeah. This poem is not about ...

It's not my birthday. In fact, this poem has nothing to do with me at all! My dad just told me that tomorrow would be partly cloudy. That is my ...

Awwww! Thank you!

Hi! I am here to inspect this piece of writing. Now let me see... ah! I understand now! This is not merely some little story. This... is art. First of ...

So, to answer your question, I have no idea. I wrote this poem when I was eleven maybe twelve years old and found it in my google docs, so I ...

Thank you for your feedback! Your opinion is very helpful!

I like this a lot! It's so thought provoking and awesome!