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Re: How to Kill a Baby
Oh wow. Assuming you were serious about the publisher part, is the baby a book? >.< That didn't come out right. What I meant to ask, was if she symbolized ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter fanfic: Dumbledore vs. Grindelwald
Wow -- intense! Very good action scenes! Kept me on the edge of my seat. Caught a couple of typos, and a couple of issues, but otherwise this was pretty ...
Aug 27, 2007 -
Re: The Vampire Queen
Dear oh dear. A princess? Training? My lord, what kind of a princess is she? :smt017 Erm... what is she training for, exactly? :!: WARNING :!: I AM ABOUT TO ...
Aug 25, 2007 -
Re: Prologue: Soul-Mate
Wow. This is interesting. Thought the name idea was pretty cool, and liked how you didn't just come out and say it from the start. When I was reading the ...
Aug 24, 2007 -
Re: The Weird Happy Ending (heavily edited)
I didn't see it before, so I can't say. What I can say, though, is this: It was incredible. You gave the readers time to like the daughter and get ...
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: Melnikov #3 /P
He tried to imagine all that had been lost in the last fefw months... few "When part of the continent sank into the earth, it caused a decrease in the ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: Melnikov #4 /P
Wow. :shock: Talk about edge of your seat. Monica lifted her head up after being shot in the lower back. She cried out for someone to help her as the ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I can read it yet! DARN IT! YES! I LOVE living in the middle of the woods! YES! I LOVE being able leave my laptop at the library while ...
Jul 22, 2007 -
Re: Until Her Day (Twenty)
Yeah, I'm hooked. :mrgreen: I've read all of these stories and am officially hooked. I only caught one mistake: In her last to years of high school, That should be ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: It's Raining
Awesome and touching. This was pretty sweet. Other than that, I don't have much to say. It was as close to perfect as you can get, seeing as no one's ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: Shamanka Wytch Book One
This was actually pretty good. No cheesy scenes where they use their magic for no purpose at all other than to show off to the reader. There were a couple ...
Jul 18, 2007 -
Re: Don't Panic
Wow. All I can say is that this was amazing. I almost cried. 'Almost' because my family is in the same room as me and I can't risk them seeing. ...
Jul 17, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 5 (The Speaking Stones of ...)
I only have time to do the first part of chapter five, so forgive me if this is a bit rushed. :oops: :) “Why can’t I have the nice maids ...
Jul 17, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 4 (How Far)
Okay. First: The castle was gray and cold, and Creiha could a violent wall of wind tearing I think you missing something... No! Creiha tried to scream, but she choked ...
Jul 11, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 3 (Arillo)
When she felt Strick nad Markus’s eyes resting upon her, And ...a small mound of stones remembering Arillo. Wow-- they work fast. I'm guessing that no more than fifteen minutes ...
Jul 11, 2007
