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Re: Waiting with the Rain
Change the font to a normal color then I'll read. This hurts my poor little eyes, sorry.
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Say your sin Chapter 1 part one
I read your posts -thank you for posting- and actually I'd like to change this from Prologue to part one of Chapter one. I'm sorry for the confusion. You will ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: What happened to forever?
Actually I was considering posting this in non-fiction. I guess I should have. It's just that I post most all my work here so this is the first place I ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: What happened to forever?
Yes, I am aware of the grammatical and spelling errors in this. It's only because I copied this dirrectly from my online diary straight to here. Minus the little note ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: A modern romance?
thank you all for your reviews! umm, Demetri dosn't have a twin, you must be thinking of Rayne and Nick, they wern't even introduced yet. And that little paragraph at ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Next Generation Academy: Chapter 1 - The Fight
Wow. Looking over the typos and repetition this was amazing. I couldn't keep a straight face while reading this, and I feel weird. Good job. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO Summer Night
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: FireFlies Chapter 1 part 4
Wow, you've got me hooked! Poor Ollie! I feel so bad for her. Being kicked out of the table is a big deal. I can hardly wait until the next ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: End the pain
Fixed it! Hope it's better now.
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: End the pain
And sorry Dreamy! Didn't mean to throw out the 'f-bomb' like that without warning my viwers. Sorry.
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: End the pain
Sorry! :oops: I usually don't bother to rate my work. I guess I should. :roll: Hope this is better now. :smt005 XOXOXOXOXOXOXO Summer Night
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Vandalism and Knives
If I could I would teach you to play guitar! But that is kinda impossible. Ha ha! XOXOXOXOXOXO Summer Night
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Blood like rivers.
I revised it, I hope this version is better! Thanks for the advice spring and Kamas! It really helped a lot. XOXOXOXO Summer Night
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Vandalism and Knives
"This probably only appeals to Emo people." Wow I actually liked this, are you calling me emo? Nevermind, I'm dropping that subject. I would really love to hear this with ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: A few feet under Chapter 1 (rated 16+ for lanaguage)
I'll rethink and re-post it later! Thanks for all your help really. I'll get to work on it right now. XOXOXOXO Summer Night
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: A few feet under Chapter 1 (rated 16+ for lanaguage)
Yeah, like I said, I'm kinda new to this type of writing. I usually don't write things on this type of setting and plot. I'm trying something different. I am ...
Nov 20, 2009