LovelessSummer

Yay! *dances* :elephant: Part two! :smt005 Well, just like before, this was amazing! I loved it, and, plus, I only saw three minor mistakes: I, however, took refuge in my ...

This was amazing! Thankfully someone already covered the one mistake I saw, so that gives me room to say: I can not wait until the next post comes out! Whatever ...

This was good! I really want you to post more because I want to find out what animal Kalu will become! :smt005 Well, that's all. I saw no mistakes. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work. :smt003 Well, here goes everything: We walked back to the room with the piano in it, and sat down. No comma needed here. ...

This was beautiful! I'm so touched that you would write this for your friend! I only saw one part that looked funny: "Does not she know," Did you mean does ...

Okay, to be honest, and I don't know if I'm the only one, but I'm really confused! I don't know what's happening! So, because of my lack of understanding, I ...

I'll definitely stick around for part two! This was very good. I agree with Stella on most parts, but I'm also glad to see you did actually read over your ...

This was really good and I'm glad to be the first to comment! I saw no grammar mistakes and your vocabulary is just superb! I only saw one spot in ...

Hi, Summer here! Well, first of all, I really liked this! There are a couple of parts that bothered me though. Like this: She collapsed on the floor, shivering. She ...

This was very nice to read! I actually really liked it. I really didn't see any major mistakes, but that semicolon in the first paragraph bothered me. It's probably correct ...

That was spectacular! I really liked it! The title is what drew me in. (I know I'm such a pervert!) I've never read anything like this, it was unique. I ...

Mo already covered the grammar issues so all I have to say now is, this was very good. I enjoyed reading this! It kept me on the edge of my ...

Okay, I know you may be new, but don't ever use idk in your stories, or something like that. Okay? This was good, I saw no major grammar issues, but ...

Hello! I'll be reviewing your work today! "Thank you for seeing me on short notice , " the young man said as soon as D r. F oreman let him ...

This was awesome! Beautiful! I love goddess Nyx more than anything and this title pulled me in like quicksand! I saw no mistakes and that just made this better! If ...