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Satires are typically humorous but they don't have to be. The main "have to have" in satire is a message is sent in the wanting to reform a problem in ...

Hello! It is a satire because of the word "alone". If you caught the message...suicide... most suicides are because people feel alone. It is criticizing how many in society shun ...

*As I want to cry* This is so good! The power behind truth: so many wake up to no presents, no parents, no food, nothing. Realization is hard to express, ...

Haha, not really :) But I really do value your opinion, so thank you so much for that idea!!

Hi! Thank you so much for your review! First, the girl/Host doesn't know she is a Host as mentioned in the prologue and she and the other Host are asleep ...

Oh okay. That makes more sense, then.

@kman134, thank you so much for your review! I see that my message is not being portrayed as I wanted in my poem and will make sure to correct it. ...

Ah, yes. I can see how "litter" can be so confusing. I will make note of that in my written form of it in my notebook. And yes, I have ...

@niteowl, thank you so much for your review! I find it very valuable and will definitely use it to better my writing. To clear your confusion (as best I can) ...

The use of personification is wonderful! I love the metamorphosis from human to part-wolf to true-wolf; it adds considerable emotion to your work as each form pertains to a certain ...

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For a first piece, wonderfully written! Poetry does not always have to have a grammatical structure. Many famous poets use what's called 'freestyle'. There doesn't have to be a rhyme ...

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I see this piece through a political stance--it's almost satirical in a way. Patriarchal societies can be extremely oppressive and I can almost imagine women "flying into the end of ...