Louisiana15

Hello! I'll work from the bottom up. First, thanks for your review! I can see how I used those a little much. I kind of wanted to seem like a ...

Okay, thanks!

Hello, again! Thematically, I was going for Love isn't always free. In the sense of (general), you aren't able to love who you want. I didn't want to tell the ...

Hey, Hermione! Thanks for your review! :) I was going for the "Annabel Lee" feel but with that slight twist. I'll make sure to make edits! :)

Hi! Thank you so much for your review! I'll make sure to work on it!

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Always glad to help!!!! Let me know if you want me to re-read it! :)

Hey! First off, you were spot on with the poem!!! It was abuse--physical, mental--that I was trying to convey. Rape is mentioned as well. So, again, spot on. The lack ...

Hey, KnightTeen. First off, thank you for being so open about trying to commit suicide... I have, too. I'll be open now that I feel a little better about being ...

Hello! First, watching Beauty and the Beast is a complete mood :) A little background: the girl is not married. She was a depressed, suicidal girl who had a special ...

Hello! Thank you so much for your review!! I'll start from the bottom and go up: First, she committed suicide. This is written by the girl about herself before she ...

Thank you :)

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Wow, this is great. The imagery is the clouds are wonderful; it adds so much meaning and depth to your work. I like how you labeled each section, revealing the ...

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Wow, this is great. The imagery is the clouds are wonderful; it adds so much meaning and depth to your work. I like how you labeled each section, revealing the ...

Thank you!