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Hey Joey :) I know why you wrote this poem and who you are talking about so I have a great understanding of where your mind is with this and ...

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Hello! Such a beautiful piece! Correct me if I'm wrong, we're talking about labor. I like how you use the word drugs repeatedly--at first, I thought someone OD-ed but when ...

Hello! Thank you for your review! First, everyone else said what you said about the phrase "being depressed is a mood," but it is correct. The whole point is "depressed" ...

Hello! Thank you for your review! Just some background: I actually am the narrator, not another character that the author typically speaks through. So, those thoughts were the exact thoughts ...

Hello! Thank you for your thoughts on this piece. I think we can all use you as a model for: "This has made me determined to try and curb my ...

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Hi, thank you for your review! I'll make sure to use them in the future edits! About the "isn't" I was asked about that earlier, actually. It is correct because ...

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Oops, Sorry! I just realized my response was put in the comments/review area. I pressed reply and my screen must've moved right as I did. My reply is above my ...

It still is a little confusing. In the first stanza "if i ever managed to catch you in some random bar, outside of the city that we fell faster than ...

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Lol, no worries! Thanks, again!