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Haha, Galerius, not at all harsh, lol. Evidently, you don't like my style of writing, and I have no problem with that, you are entitled to like whatever you like, ...

mhm, I remember the other thing I wanted to comment on! Rufus Little, the name somewhat reminds me of a dog, lol. Perhaps that's because my dog is called Roddy, ...

A bump for more reviews, anyone? xD

Okay, this is going to be very hard to explain... I am aware that thy does not mean my, I don't mean my. However, I am using thy for a ...

Hahah, I've just realised I've been calling you Woo l ster when it's actually Wooster. xD Apologies; --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ~Kirsten

One that I wrote and posted a while ago: a most strange spectacle; to behold the stars, glimmering. the withered clouds’ corpses dance august. To reach for the stars; a ...

Thanks for the review, Evi. But no, that's not quite what I mean. xD

Nope :P You're very good at guessing though ;)

Thanks for the reviews Jon and Adna. xD Jon - Rainbow. Hmm... good guess, but not quite. Actually, reading it over it sounds quite like it's about a rainbow, but ...

eleven Thanks for explaining it to me, Eva. I do really love this poem. it could be any person saying it, to make the protagonist less of a character, more ...

Church element *Just a note of something to remind myself of later, as I sometimes forget things when reviewing things and I find this rather annoying* Expect a review in ...

Eh... this is set in England in around the 1820s, and from what I've gathered people used a lot of 'rathers' and 'perhapses' at time, and children were very formal, ...

Okay, about the characters, I'll try and comprehend them a little for you ;) The 'he' is the protagonist. He's the one the whole piece is talking about. The 'she' ...

Aw, thanks so much Rosey. xD I haven't really any idea about this piece, I have no idea how it was written or anything. Basically, I think the lack of ...

I'm back; Atmosphere You built up a most wonderful atmosphere here. It truly is beautiful. I warn you just to be careful not to ruin it though, some of the ...