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Before I begin let me say that this is a really good poem, all things considered. There are many powerful thoughts and more than not they are put in a ...

Helllooo... Welcome to the site and I'm sure you'll enjoy it and benefit from it immensely. This was a sweet poem, very honest, although it could do with more stylistic ...

I really enjoyed this. It was really honest. I have some (not so much criticisms but) recommendations: The image of the superhero used in the second and first stanzas is ...

This piece had a few 'winning' moments for me: "You really are a child, aren't you?" He asked Dresden with a voice of impetuousness. Winning! ...pretended that he was not ...

Hi, NewHero. Here to do a review. Hopefully I can help you improve this already quite good work. First of all I want to tell you how stellar your descriptions ...

Hey man! TheNewHero here to review your work. Firstly I have to say that I loved it. It was, as the previous reviewer said, a bit on the predictable side ...

Well after those reviews I'm just another drop spilled. Anyway, I felt this was a really good piece. Especially the ending. Just a few things to complain about. Specifically: :arrow: ...

Personally I'm still in love with your storytelling. It's simple and effective - I especially love the twist ending. Your writing style is beautiful as well and you've nailed originality ...

Hi, NewHero here to review. I gave your piece of star, but I honestly thinks it needs quite a bit of refining. But first and most obviously, it should be ...

Hey Dragonette. The checklist on the side of this reviewing block is glaring at me so I'll follow its orders: My General Impression is that this was a beautifully paced ...

This poem was pretty good, I s'pose. I liked the rhyme and lack thereof. However, I wonder, exactly what you were trying to get across. Explanation? The topic of your ...

Excellent job. Short and sweet and powerful. I have a few suggestions for you: First of all the title needs a little bit of work. I get that it's a ...

I'm going to review your work, today. Now, this won't be the best review ever so I apologize. ------------------------- When you write a song you have one of two options: ...

Welcome to YWS! My name's TheNewHero and I'll be reviewing your story today. What I loved about your story, was, the main character. His sister. Roul. In fact, almost all ...

I'm TheNewHero. This is what I think of your poem. Firstly, let me just say that you don't seem to command a good idea of audience. Who are you writing ...