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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: No Way Out

    This piece was absolutely beautiful. The metaphors you used in this displayed how the speaker feels about reality. If you are the narrator, there is a way out. You'll find ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Nighttime and Morning

    Nighttime was my favorite out of the two. The imagery and the personification made the poem feel so alive. Morning was nice too, but personally I prefer Nighttime. One of ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Some More Melodramatic B.S. That Nobody Will Read

    This is an amazing poem that thoroughly and accurately describes depression and loneliness. That is a difficult thing to do, unless you have suffered through it at some point. The ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I Cried For Nothing

    First of all, I just want to say this reminds me of the Maximum Ride books. Anyways... On to the review! This is a sad poem to me, maybe because ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: One Last Leap of Faith

    This was a very well-written poem. It is a sad story, but it was also very pleasant. The speaker must have really loved "her" if they decided to die to ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Upside down

    This was absolutely amazing. It was depressing, but then you read about how life is upside down. That turned my thinking upside down for sure, and this sure did change ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I know that you hate me

    I liked this poem, so I shall review it... It was very well written, but it has some mistakes (we all make them though). In the fourth line you put ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: 1

    This... Is truly powerful. Some people may even be afraid to read this because of how well you described what it's like. Personally, I like how the narrator, whom I ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Mourn In My Own Way, Live With It.

    First of all, I am so sorry for your loss. When someone you love very much goes, it's hard to believe. Congratulations on taking the first step: admitting it happened ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Life After Wartime

    Simply put... I love this. Frank, as you named the character, was surprisingly an interesting character. I like how you keep each stanza similar by putting "Frank's ___" after each ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bus Catching

    This... is really well done. The rhymes make me think of a nursery rhyme, while the rhythm of the poem is so light and bouncy. It is a short poem, ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: I've learned to hide my necklaces under my shirt

    I really like how deep this is. This isn't about necklaces, is it? It's about hiding who you really are, at least in my eyes. It's sad how we have ...

    Jul 8, 2014


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