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From the complex legalese opening I knew exactly what to expect from this piece. And it delivered. Overlong, pretentious, unnecessarily verbose, dull reading meant to suggest higher intelligence in th

Quick review for a quick work! Let me say that I just generally really dug this piece. I was confused at the second line, but the third line brought it ...

Hi there, let's get this going shall we? First off, I'd like to start with the first part we as an audience notice about this work, the title. Society Wins. ...

I don't even know where to start. I guess the first issue is that these are far too short to be considered chapters. All together, your intro and first chapter ...

I don't know where to begin. Technically, this is a very well written piece. Great sentence structure, pacing, the dialogue is good, it flows nicely. Honestly, from a technical level, ...

On an emotional level, I loved this. On a technical level, I really didn't care for it. I completely get the emotion behind this. I've been in this situation a ...

I don't even know where to begin. I guess my biggest flaw is the part with the "hoodlums" at the basketball court. They were horrible inner city black person stereotypes. ...

This is a perfect example of trying too hard. To me, it's reminiscent of a "Saw" film. Full of gore and gristle that is sickening, not because it's actually scary, ...

As someone who doesn't believe length of a work to be of any merit, I don't have a problem with how short this is. One of my friends has written ...

Where to start? Grammar, grammar, grammar! The mistakes vary and are all over the place. You space out what should be one word (inside) and make a single word out ...

I didn't.. I didn't like this. I guess it was well written but the narrator's tone seemed too much for me. He also said the word "fuck" and any of ...

This was nothing short of genius. It was hilarious. I adore it. Please buy some decent clothing that's in your size. Those cellulite bumps-they burn my eyes... To quote 4chon, ...

AW SNAP! I really liked this! The guy hiding and detailing everything wss nice and kept you in the dark, and then, when the guys took their playthings, well, that ...

This was...this was decent. I didn't hate it, but I didn't love it. I just sort "meh" about it. I think it's biggest problem is the rhythm. It's really off ...

i'm not afraid of frogskin- my childhood hands clasped more cold, sticky-toed frogs than my adolescent fingers brushed the minds of boys sorta didn't get these two lines i would ...