Llamahorse

Thanks dogs. In my overdone attempt of less is more, I always write short cut minimalistic stories. But you're right. I need to take a bigger brush and expand.

Thank you dogs! The title is a big let down, I understand. But I never gave it a title when I wrote it so it came in a hurry without ...

Thank you so much for the review umaima! Yes, in all my works I lack the perfection of spelling.

Thank you Dog. I never really planned to turn this into a full story though.

You're absolutely right about the porch, sorry.

hey.... Your writing is very powerful and catches the reader because you are writing about real experiences. You will go far. At some point it reminded me of The Book ...