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Okay, so I loved your story. It broke my heart that the boy had to die, but it was really good. The only thing that bothered me was the and ...

Beautiful, amazing, awesome, magnificent, epic! Should I go on??? Basically, I love it and can't wait for your next chapter. (I find that I'm repeating that every time I post ...

Hey! Srry i'm soooooo late, but i've pretty busy. Anyways, I liked it. It was really good, you've got great talent. You leave me speechless again. (As in I can't ...

The first thing i thought was "OMG he kissed her!!!" lol. Again though I have to say it seemed a little rushed. When writing I love to go straight to ...

Love it Maddy! I thought this story was written very well! Good job and Keep writing! Sierra :mrgreen:

This was pretty short, my friend, but I love short pieces because they always leaving you wondering. Anyways, I like the story, but there are a few things you kinda ...

I thought this was a really good story. The only thing that I dont understand is the part where the parents make her leave. I mean I know it's because ...

It's so sweet. I really liked your story, it was written beautifully! That's all I got so, Good job and Keep writing! Sierra :mrgreen:

This is really good. It was kind of hard for me to read, because oddly enough I had a friend that went though this not to long ago. It's nice ...

This was really good! And I swear that if you stop posting chapters I think I might just cry! Lol, but seriously each chapter is getting better and better. Please ...

NOOOOOOOO! I was yelling at Lucas for like 4 minutes before I realized what I was doing. Lol. I thought it was really good! Good job Pink, can't wait for ...

I think this was a very good story. I like how you brought the bible into the whole thing too. I'm not that good with nitpicking, so I'll leave that ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was a great story. I hate that you didnt give us any background info, but it makes the reader want to read on. I agree with Grabriella that ...

Beautiful. I love your story. It's sweet from beginning to end. I think what I love most is the pure innocents of the little girl, and the fact that she ...

Twilight was the first thing I thought of when I saw your title. It seems like everyone is obsessed with the thing. (I honestly liked Vampires sucks a lot better.) ...