LittlePrincess

There isn't much to say for this piece except that it was very good. Since it's only the beginning I'm sure you'll be going into detail about.. well, everything. I ...

Hi. I like the alliteration in your title :) Just thought I'd let you know.. now onto the review. I wasn't expecting to see her for the first time that ...

Wow, I really liked that. It really demonstrates the emotions she has (I assume she's a girl). It's a very interesting style, and I will have to see how the ...

Hi there! Here for a review :) First thing is that I am not a big fan of the one paragraph thing. I suppose it is a matter of opinion ...

Hi, first of all I just want to say that a lot of times when I can't sleep I will grab my itouch and write stuff. 3 am is when ...

Here for a review as promised :) My childhood dolls and stuffed animals sat impressively over my shelves. I never liked getting rid of things so I kept them in ...

Hello :) Just one note, you don't need to write "Please read and review/offer advice" because that is what is expected when you post your story ^_^ Now, grammar. " ...

Hi there. So I can see your point here, it's that High School sucks (obviously) but it seems that you stray away from this point, especially with the skipping part ...

I like the Renesmee/Jake piece, good job. Except it seems a little familier, the honeymoon being cut short. I think you should go original and not have it be exactly ...

I haven't read chapter one but I'm here for a review anyway Erik Carter is the hottest guy Was instead of is for tense consistancy. So it's pretty cliche, the ...

Hello there! Here for a review! Him and his four brothers were trained to fix cars I'm pretty sure it should be "He and his four brothers" Secretly he wished ...

First of all, this made me laugh! I loved the humor and the casualness. Hey I'm a zombie Shows said casualness and humor. Nitpick: but one day one fateful day ...

Hello there! One thing He push me up against the wall, and pressed his lips to mine *pushed This is clearly the beginning to a larger story and does a ...

I live on the east coast and the heat has been brutal, I sympathize completely. I really liked this as a little short story. Tucker was a control freak That ...

Hi, I decided to check to see if you had anything new and you did! So I am here for a review :) Lets get started... H.o.m.e. W.o.r.k.... Why is ...