LittleLee

Wow, the poem's really breathtaking! Loved it, hope to see more. Let's get to the review... - You should have written the poem in several stanzas, not like this... It ...

Its a very nicely written poem. I enjoyed reading it because those eggs can be taken as so many things... Opportunities, ides, etc. However, you should start with capital letters, ...

The poem is really cool and the manner in which you describe the voices is brilliant. However, you should use full stops at the end of each stanza. And you ...

Its a thrilling read, very enjoyable. However, your grammar and spellings need to improve. Your most common mistake is mixing up 'their' and 'there'. 'Their' is a term which is ...

It's interesting, but there isn't really a background, is there? All we know is that Rikki is Kira's cousin and that Luke is their friend. And describe their forest! Its ...

The poem is quite moving, and very well written. It has various meanings, which makes it interesting and fun to read. However, I don't understand the sixth line. Perhaps you ...

The story is quite interesting, but you are changing your tenses frequently. Your grammar needs to be polished a bit, as it's rather dull. You have a really pleasant-to-read writing ...