LittleFox

Yay I'm doing a 3rd review in one night so you should be proud of me :D The story is getting more interesting as it progresses. Colbalt seems pretty cool ...

Me again! Alright, I liked this chapter. A few tips though.... "Before I know what has happened, the lady stops in front of me, causing me to do the same." ...

Hello yet again :3 This chapter has great beginning and end points. Finishing it with Isugoro being led out for committing a crime really makes the reader eager to read ...

Hey, I'm getting this review done before the weekend is over :D Alright, so far I really like Quartz but there's just one thing. It's always been a pet peeve ...

I finally finished this chapter after some procrastination! I'm excited because I feeling everything beyond this point is going to get even more interesting. So anyway, like always, good work. ...

Hey dere ;) after a very long time I'm finally going to start reviewing like I said I would. I know you're excited that your work will be graced with ...

Opps, I accidentally pressed enter before I could type anything so sorry for the blank comment! Anyway, I'm here to write a review for you! First things first i have ...

Hello :) I have to say this poem hooked me right away. I would have never thought of describing asthma in this way and that's what I love most. You ...

This is so powerful, I'm not sure I know how to review it. You invoke emotion so subtly and effectively. In the beginning it seemed like maybe the speaker was ...

Hello! I'm here to do a review pour vous! I'll just be writing my advice as I read. "...glad that it's only the man that brought her back from the ...

Hello, LittleFox here! Let me say first that I really enjoyed this piece. I really like the simplicity of it. The student as an interesting attitude without being over the ...

Alright, you already know I love this, but now it's time to go into detail! I love that theres always something going on to keep the reader's interest peaked. There's ...

This is really lovely! I love the feeling that comes from this. It's very sweet and very sad. From the beginning it pulls the reader in. You made great use ...

This is really good!Quality writing, I love it! Sometimes it's hard for me to keep my attention of some writing, but this hooked me easily. Great description and word usage. ...

This is very well written, but it needs just a little more. Something to give it more uniqness. It needs a more personal voice and more feeling. I don't know ...