LittleFox

Hello, Littlefox here for a review! First off I like this piece a lot. Odd as it is I have a love for bugs so I was immediately drawn in ...

Hello, Littlefox here for a review! I really like this piece a lot. I've always enjoyed when beautiful and dark elements are mixed together. you start off with this really ...

Hi there, Littlefox here for a review! I've always liked quick little poems, and I like the feeling behind this one. However I think adding more imagery to this would ...

Hello there! I always love short stories like this, so I was glad to find it! I like that it is quick and to the point, however I do feel ...

Hello, Little fox here for a review! First off, I just want to say that I really enjoyed reading this! The plot is unique and engaging and I'd love to ...

Hello, Littlefox here for a review! First off I thought the title was really interesting and because of that I clicked on this immediately. I was very curious to see ...

Hello, Littlefox here for a review! Looks like you've got a pretty interesting story started! However, there's a lot that happens here in a very small amount of time. I ...

Hello, Littlefox here for a review! I really like the idea and concept for this poem. I love the feeling behind it and the message that you should be yourself ...

Hello, I've retuned yet again :P thanks for awakening me from my YWS-slumber. Anyway let's get stated. As usual I will not be reading the other reviews before making my ...

Hello! My initial reaction to this poem is that its imagery and tone are really nice! The lines have a very nice flow to them, i enjoyed the word-choice, and ...

Ayyy I'm back! Initially, I like the pace that you start this chapter out in. Its smooth and flows very nicely which makes it a nice, easy read. I'm happy ...

Hey there! me again. This was a pretty well-balanced chapter again and here I am with no nit picks. A run through could edit could always improve the flow and ...

Hey there here for another review, getting caught up slowly! I have to say I loved this chapter! In fact I think it is one of my favorites. I can't ...

Hey there I'm back! This was an exciting chapter with all the emotions and events, it was fun to read! However the one nitpick I have for this chapter is ...

Hey there! Finally I have returned *extravagant bow* So let's begin the review! "Maggie is limp, though her breathing is finally back to even as I hold her against my ...